(Vol. 2, No. 1 - Winter 1998)


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by John Norton


JCPS middle school principals are sharpening their skills as instructional leaders through regular workshops and other professional development experiences. In early December, a group of principals gathered at Gheens Academy to explore the examination of student work as a technique to improve teaching in their schools.

When teachers examine their assignments and the products of those assignments (student work) together, they begin to probe more deeply into what they expect students to learn and how well they assess what students know and can do. By looking critically at student work, teachers can make judgments about the quality of their own lessons and think about how they make their grading decisions.

"How do we make sure that when we score the same quality work in two different classrooms or two different schools, we're going to apply the same standards?" asked Sherry DeMarsh, a former principal who helps direct the middle school reform effort. "How do we develop criteria that is so clearcut that it doesn't matter where we are in the school system, the expectations about quality are going to be the same?" Looking at student work together can begin to get at those questions, she said.

Here's an excerpt of a conversation among five principals and a master teacher when they looked at an assignment about ancient Greece. The conversation has been edited and shortened for space reasons.


Principal #1 (facilitator): What did you see in this work?

Principal #2: I thought in both papers the students seemed to know a lot of information about ancient Greece. They had knowledge in their heads to pull on to answer the question.

Principal #3: They have the knowledge to answer the questions but if you look at the rubric, they have to have an explanation to earn a 3 or a 4, and I don't think either paper does a real good job of explaining what they have listed. The first paper seems to be a little more detailed but doesn't really give an explanation. It just kind of repeats the information. The second paper really just lists (some facts). They have the knowledge and probably could do a real good job, but didn't take the time to.

Principal #4: I think they have a knowledge base of ancient Greece but don't make the connections with our culture today. They list some things but they don't show much understanding of the connections.

Master Teacher: The second one, although it's shorter, did a little more with connections. "They had a stage with chairs rising up into the air and so do we."

Principal #5: I don't think the student is the problem. The "explain" part is confusing. I don't see enough specifics about what is wanted on this explanation. If something about the connectedness was in the directions, like "how could you tie things in their civilization to ours," that might help.

P #4: Maybe the problem is with the word "influences." They may be OK with "explain" but maybe they don't have a good grasp of what it means to "influence."

P #5: And when I look at the rubric, which I assume the kids got before they started, to get a 4 you have to give three examples, which both of these kids did. But then you say "thoroughly explaining." What does that mean? We're talking about a kid, here. Do they know how much "thoroughly" is? To me, this first person probably thought they were thoroughly explaining it. I think the rubric just has to be more specific about what the kids will be judged on. "What do you want me to do?" The kids are spitting back information they learned about ancient Greece. They're trying to tell us how those things are the same as we have today. If I think like a 6th or 7th grader, I probably think I've done what I was asked to do.

P #2: Do you see the problem here is that the level of the question is too high for our kids, or do you believe our teaching isn't high enough?

P #1: I am thinking it's more of the latter. The students would have to know a lot to be able to answer this well.

MT: Do you think this is a open-response question (used on KIRIS tests)- which would mean that it takes it to the level of synthesizing information and using and applying knowledge-or just another essay question asking students to repeat back information?

P #2: Is that basically the difference between an open-response and an essay question? An open-response moves you to application or synthesis? That's interesting.

MT: One of the state accountability people told me that as he went around Jefferson County, one of the biggest problems he saw was that most teachers were still asking essay questions instead of open-response. And I've been thinking about that a great deal. If open-response is supposed to be a form of assessment, then I would say that it requires the student to do some kind of application. It's a little easier in math because it's easier to incorporate application in a math question. If you're going to ask students to analyze and synthesize in social studies, you're going to have to be teaching at a high level.

P #5: How would you take this and make it into more of an application assignment? Would it be more of a simulation-type thing? I don't know exactly how you would do it.

MT: I think you would have had to have kids doing the kinds of activities where they were examining modern and ancient culture and making those connections in their lessons. I think the other thing that the question raises is whether the instruction matched the assessment. Although she says that ancient Greece "produced many great philosophers, scientists, mathematicians, artists, writers and achitects," neither of the students mentioned geometry, or columns, or democracy. If this seemed to be true across most of the papers, it raises questions about whether you assessed what you taught, or whether you taught what you intended to teach.

P #2: Maybe the question did match the instruction. Maybe this is the way she taught. And that is the crux of KERA, I think. We're still teaching memorize, and list, and explain. And we have to go deeper than that.

P #5: It seems to me that when you're doing an open-response question, isn't it supposed to be a problem kids solved based on what they learned in class? There really isn't a problem presented here. It's just kind of list some things. I think words like "analyze," "compare," "connect," "contrast" would have been better than "explain."

P #4: If the question was more specific in what it was asking, would that have helped focus the kids? It's very general. For example, suppose you had said, "compare present day movie theaters to ancient Greek theaters." Narrow it down so they can go more in depth.

MT: It would have required that the students have done some pretty in-depth research on ancient Greek theatre. But maybe that would have been more meaningful to them as opposed to feeding back all the facts listed in the textbook.

P #1: This question makes me wonder if teachers know exactly how to write an open-response question. I don't know that we've had enough 'how to.'

P #2: We always come back to the same thing - professional development. We always come back to that.

MT: This work really raises two issues: First, is the teacher asking the right question. And, more importantly perhaps, are we also instructing students in a way that makes it possible for them to answer questions that require them to solve problems. For that to happen, the student would have to have some time in class to do some serious indepth study so that their knowledge is not all superficial. And then the assessment might need to be more in-depth also; perhaps an oral presentation or performance of some sort.

P #5: I think you raise the right issues. So how do we help teachers develop in-depth questions without making them feel intimidated or threatened when we critique their work?

MT: The key issue is planning. How are teachers planning? Are they planning by time - "I'm going to study ancient Greece for six weeks, and we're going to do these activities" rather than to say, "at the end of six weeks I want students to be able to solve a problem I pose to them about analyzing the influence of an ancient civilization on current times." So what do I need to have them do between now and the end of six weeks so they will be able to do that. And it's likely that you would spend the six weeks period differently than you would if you just filled up the time with activities.

P #2: Can see you how this process might really generate interest among teachers? If you thought, "I've got to bring in one of my assignments next month to talk about, which would one I bring? What am I looking for from my students?" It could really be thought-provoking for teachers.

P #4: I think the biggest question is, could you pull it off? Can you build enough trust for them to have this kind of conversation about their own work?

P #5: I think that's the question. We have tried this, we've just barely gotten off the ground with it, but I find that the defensive wall is up. And also, it's not focused on whether we asked the question the way we really wanted to, or taught what we asked for when we assessed. It's all about the kid. "He's not a very good writer. He can't do this kind of work." And they can't seem to get off of that.

MT: That's why a good facilitator is essential. A good facilitator can eventually help build that trust. You're not just laying yourself open for criticism-there are rules to follow so it doesn't get personal.

P #2: That's why it might be good to start off with some work from outside the group, so you can practice the process without anyone feeling too threatened. (Several principals agree.) When you're doing this, you'd almost better start with a strong teacher who says "I'll try it." Let it go that way. And if no one volunteers, stick with an outside sample of work.

P #3: This kind of process can also demonstrate the importance of teachers planning together. If you plan together, you can decide in advance what you want kids to know and do, and you can look at what you get from kids and talk together about how well your planning worked, without anyone feeling singled out.

MT: Teachers are tired of hearing "you don't have to work harder, you have to work smarter." But the secret to working smarter is to work together and share the load. That's the answer that has alluded us. But it's very hard to change the individualistic, competitive culture in our schools.

P #5: If we could just create that extra team planning time, time that's apart from their individual time, then you'd almost be forced to plan collaboratively. That's what we're campaigning for-creating that time.

MT (summing up): If I had been the presenting teacher, after I heard this conversation, I think I might have been disturbed by the fact that you didn't think this was a higher level question. And I think I would have questioned that, but I think you would have persuaded me.

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