My Most Successful
Lesson This Year


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As teachers began to finish off their school year, MiddleWeb editor John Norton asked them to share a teaching or learning highlight.

Well, summer is almost upon us, and it's time to begin the summer Question of the Week. This first question is resurrected from last year, when it produced some great posts with lots of good ideas and insights. I'll just repeat my prompt!

-- What's the most successful teaching/learning experience that's taken place in your classroom this year (give us some details)?

-- What made it successful?

-- What will change about your teaching as a result of your success?

I'm sure we have a lot of good stories and ideas to share!

- John

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Laura explained a lesson she used that not only gave students an opportunity to practice their problem-solving skills but to learn how to use software designed to implement mind mapping strategies.

I have a few units which always produce a real life connection, but the one lesson I'd select was a problem-solving situation. Instead of leading students through how to use the program Inspiration, I set up the procedure they needed to learn in order to diagram the upcoming book report. We had been using mind mapping for many concepts so this was the next step.

I had them, as a class, give suggestions for learning a new software program. They created a list together or possible steps to take. The next day in the lab they were to record their progress in learning how to use Inspiration. They could not talk. I let them work this way for 1/2 the class. I then let them collaborate, recording what they learned from each other. I had students print out what they had on their screen. I was surprised as some had used the program to web out the problem solving activity.

We then discussed how helpful collaboration was in problem solving. We talked about the fact many times we're given something to learn on our own, such as a computer program. I also had students then ask the "How did you do that?" and we made sure everyone was up to date before working on the Book Reports.

I felt this lesson was successful because it made a real-life connection. Students were building on previous knowledge as well as experiencing the frustrations that come with a new problem. I believe this lesson helped me see ways to build on what they know more effectively and not feel the need to just deliver instructions.

- Laura

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Annie described an exciting journal approach to teaching Social Studies in which learners established their own theories by using primary sources.

One of the most successful lessons was my "Journal" lessons. I do two of them: one for the Lewis and Clark Journey and one for Aztec Daily Life. Most of the ideas I generated and some characteristics of it I took from the "History Alive!" series.

I teach Social Studies for grades 5-8. For these Journal lessons the kids make their own journals using construction paper and lined writing paper stapled together. They decorate the covers in anyway they choose. The students are then placed in mixed ability groups (made by me) in which they will work for the next week to two weeks.

As soon as they enter class they get into their groups and look to the board for directions and materials to gather. The materials they need will be placed on a central table. The board instructions might look like this: "Please gather the following materials for your group- 1 set of markers, 2 photos, 1 textbook per student." etc.

Once all are settled with materials I do a mini lesson (about 5-7 minutes). This might include a dramatic reading from a primary source (I might read from Lewis and Clark's actual journals or a letter from Cortes describing the Aztecs), to a list of facts and content information to a review of what we had done the previous day. It might sound something like this: "Ok, you are in the middle of an unknown continent. You have been traveling with Lewis and Clark for three weeks now and have seen many strange animals and plants. You have no idea if or when you will reach the Pacific. You suddenly encounter a group of hostile Native Americans..." etc. I basically 'set the stage' for that day's journal.

Then the students engage in hands-on, inquiry-based learning. Instead of me telling them what happened in history they create their own historical theories and gather facts and data (using photos, reference books, textbooks). They place these discoveries and theories in their journals in the form of letters, pictures, and sketches based on guided questions that I list on the board.

Year after year kids come back to me and remember these Journal lessons the most. They recall the facts and the historical theories more than from a lecture style lesson. They feel like accomplished historians as I tell them that they have done what PhD historians do (look at 'artifacts' and evidence and create a theory of what happened).

I believe it's successful as it engages the children not only in learning historical/subject content but in the methodology of history itself. The children are creating a scaffolding of learning, not just copying notes from the board. They are engaging those brain cells in answering critical thinking questions. During these lessons I NEVER have a behavior problem as they are so busy and engaged. After about 2 weeks of Journal exploration we have a 'debriefing' of the lesson.

It has changed or will change my teaching in that I am working toward creating more of these guided discovery lessons. I'd like to grow as a teacher by including more varied lessons of this type in my curriculums.

- Annie

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Using a backpack, Caron created an opportunity for her seventh graders to practice their ratio and percentage skills.

My lesson this year was a practical investigation.

We were studying ratios and percentages. So I lined the halls one day with two scales and made each seventh grader weigh with and w/o their backpack. They were told to bring the bag, just like it was, to class the next day.

We did a "line item" inventory in class and broke the contents out into categories of texts, notebooks, supplies, and "stuff." Then we calculated the approximate weight of their bag based on their weight. Then compared the actual with approximate.

I had them write an essay discussing specific ways they could reduce the weight of the bag.

We analyzed the data of the grade in each class, by gender, class, anyway we could. We looked at weights that stood out and tried to find justification for them (Some kids counted their sports bags....some had two sets of books and they had less to carryetc.)

In the end, we came up with very workable ideas for saving backs. I plan to do it again this year.

- Caron

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Joanne commented on an area of concern in the ratio/percent lesson.

Caron, this sounds like a grand assignment, but as the mother of an overweight child, the darned danger bells start clanging in my head. She would be mortified to have to weigh herself in class. Kids can be cruel, especially around non-sleek kids.

I love the idea of the assignment, but wonder if it couldn't be done with posted weight ranges... then assign students different weights, work out the ratios, etc, and post them. Students could then privately find their own weight on the charts and learn appropriate backpack weights, etc.

I know this isn't AS personal, but I truly worry about the "non-norm" kids....... too skinny, too heavy, etc for whom weighing could become a cause for unkindnesses.

For what it's worth,

-Joanne

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Caron responded to Joanne's concern.

I took that into consideration. Several students were not comfortable, and that was fine, we did it later. Also, we charted weights of book bags, not weights of students. The kids were the only ones who saw their own weights and then determined if their bags were within the accepted range.....They provided info (not identified by name) and I tallied all the answers.

I was borderline anorexic for years and worked very hard to remove the threat but make it as personal as possible. All the essays were very positive.

- Caron

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Trish told how one of her colleagues avoided the trauma of being weighed publicly.

You are absolutely correct. We have a teacher in 7th grade who helps his students change pounds to kilograms (or whatever gram it is) by using weight. He first gets on the scale and uses his weight as the first example in conversion. He then ASKS who in the class would like to be the second conversion example. It is strictly volunteer. If no one volunteers he just makes up weights. Having been overweight as a child myself, this would have been very traumatic for me to be weighed and I probably would have refused and been sent to the office.

- Trish

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Joanne replied to Caron

How terrific! Thanks for explaining, and understanding. I can see how it can be done now without embarrassing anyone. The students simply have to do a subtraction that no one else has to see. Whew.
- Joanne


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Kathy shared ways she used hands on and real world topics in her classroom teaching this past year.

Two of the most successful learning experiences this year had to do with Antarctica. In the first one we made salt flour maps of Antarctica. The second one was the students wrote persuasive essays abut the importance of the Antarctic treaty.

The first one was a hands-on experience. Students created the maps. They drew the maps on corrugated cardboard first. They painted the oceans & seas. Then we mixed up the dough and they made the 3D map. After the map dried they painted it white. They were then given a list of places and sites to locate on their map. They were given a list of 25-30 sites; they needed to do at 15 to meet the standard. Eleven out twelve kids used all of the sites on the list.

The essay was on a topic that was relevant to the kids. Environment and international peace are very important to my Vermont kids and they really got into it. One of the essays talked about Palestine and Israel and how it was too bad they couldn't figure out a way to get along as all these countries did. They discussed the importance of scientific research.

In the future I will try to incorporate more hands-on, real world topics in my classroom.

- Kathy

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Dollie explained how she used the students themselves to model successful writing skills to their peers.

OK I'm one of those lurkers, but this time I really have something to share.

I started implementing a writer's workshop in my classroom this year, and although I didn't feel like it was implemented fully it was very successful. My students began to see themselves as writers. They strived to improve their writing, and we did beautifully on the state writing test! (10 scored at the highest level where usually I have 2 at that level)

The key was to model using mini-lessons. I often looked for a student who had done something exceptional -- ex. used interesting verbs, similes, had a great lead etc -- and let them demonstrate/share with the class at the overhead. They really strived to improve their writing so that they might be selected to teach the class a new skill. Anyone out there using writing workshop I'd love to hear your management ideas. As a beginner I know I have a lot to learn. Anyone not using a writing workshop- you should give it a try. Check out the books by Katie Wood Ray for help.

- Dollie

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Marsha affirmed Dollie's approach to teaching writing.

Sorry it's taken me so long to respond, but our last day of school was yesterday. It's crazy around here. I saved your message because I was so thrilled to hear about kids taking on the role of being a writer. That's the measure of success, at least in my mind.

When you can motivate students to take responsibility for their own learning, to find internal reasons for working to improve their own work....well, I can't see how it gets better than that. Perfecting the craft (grammar, transitions, sparkling language, etc) will come with practice and instruction. Keep it up and thanks for sharing this bit of encouragement.

-Marsha

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Brenda shared an exciting collaborative project that connected her class with students in Israel.

Sorry for replying so late to this question. This week I transitioned from being a mom to becoming a grandma -- a step that turned out to be pretty amazing. This life-changing event happened last Wednesday and the computer has been the last thing on my mind. Now that I'm back from my soul vacation...

I am thinking about my most successful lesson this year. I guess I've had a few "successful" ones but this one was successful because I actually saw the cool, savvy middle school personae broken through.

The activity came out of our "We the Children..." online project. For this project, my students had a chance worked alongside a Grade 6/7 class from Magan International School in Tel Aviv, Israel. The students had been emailing back and forth and I wanted my students to get a feel for the reality of life in Israel. One morning I pointed them to an extensive "photo essay" presentation from the CNN site.
Up to this point, I would say my students viewed their Israeli peers as they would any other 12 or 13 year old. This was largely because the emails from Israel were void of any mention of the suicide bombings and violence that were part of daily life if Israel. The kids wrote about the things that concern most middle school kids -- sports, boy/girls, music etc. The photo essay was very descriptive and graphic and took my students by surprise. You could have heard a pin drop in the room as my students flipped through the pictures of a war-torn country and read the accompanying explanations. The kids who naturally default to joking around, suddenly took on a very serious demeanor.

After they were done, we met together and discussed what we had seen, the implications for their new foreign friends and their overall impressions and feelings. The students were somber and talked about how different they felt about terrorism since they now knew someone in Israel, how they watched the evening news with concern, wondering if one of the suicide bombings had occurred in Tel Aviv, and if so, had it touched the lives of one of the kids from the Grade 6/7 class.

One boy told how he had attended a rally at his synagogue that week in support of peace in Israel -- he even brought the program folder in for us to see. We discussed some of the "We the Children..." writing that the Israeli students had sent us...writing that spoke of the fear and terror that they felt (but couldn't seem to discuss in their emails). We discussed why it may be easier to write their feelings in poem form as opposed to in their emails.

We talked about one poem that compared "dangerous" Tel Aviv with "safe" Chicago. They learned what the term "relative" meant as we discussed how even Chicago could appear like a safe haven when compared to an environment where people strap bombs to themselves in support of their "cause".

As I looked at their serious faces and passionate words I realized that Internet access had not only broadened my student's world view but that learning and compassion had penetrated their hearts. If you'd like to read the writing from Magan International School in Tel Aviv, you can access it at:

http://www.abccharter.com/StudentWebIndex/Rights/Israel/index.html

Sincerely:

Brenda Dyck

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Myrna commented on Brenda's project.

This was a most touching lesson. I plan to share it with my students tomorrow. We just returned from a trip to NYC and I would say that the visit to Ground Zero made the year's events come alive for the students. Our bus was totally silent as we rode past and the students looked out and wondered.

Our yearly trip to Israel was cancelled due to this violence and while I know the kids are disappointed, I don't really think they can imagine what is really going on there. The essays from the school in Tel Aviv will be so much more vivid than teacher talk. Thanks.

- Myrna

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Ellen Berg offered a lesson from her summer school session.

I'm going to cheat a little bit here and share my most successful lesson this summer. I have been playing around with various aspects of RW-workshop to work out the bugs before I try to go full-force in September. Our project for the summer is a personal memory book. I've been reading biographical picture books as read alouds to give them a "feel" for the genre and giving writing mini-lessons on various writing techniques.

My students' first assignment was a "childhood memory" narrative. The concepts I focused on were writing strong leads, including a beginning, middle, and end, and peer revision. I avoided my usual weakness of rushing kids through writing assignments because of my fear that my principal will be unhappy that it takes us 2 weeks to complete a piece (which I found out is no big deal to her--quality over quantity!). We also did lots of talking about what they thought "good" writing was and about the books we've shared.

The results? The papers my students have written are honestly the highest in quality I have ever seen, even though this group is lower academically than any I've had in the past 3-4 years. I had no one complain about writing or revising because they really understood what I was looking for and I had given them that "just in time" support.

This experience has really helped theory move to practice for me. I can't imagine going back to the old way and the tedious writing I had to grade. So far, no one has received less than a C according to the scoring guide, and most of the narratives are A's and B's. Better yet, my students are proud of their writing--one of my boys asked me to make 25 copies of his narrative so he could distribute them at his family reunion--this from a boy who statistically should be flunking out of school because of his situation: abandonned by mom, adopted by grandma who just passed away 4 months ago, now living with an aunt.

This experience was a big A-ha for me.

Ellen

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Ellen Berg delivered her lesson plan!

Okay, it's been more than a couple of days, but here is the lesson as promised!

First, Rick pointed out the complete burn out on autobiographies his kids have experienced. I would agree on that IF it were the type of assignment that asked students to write about their entire lives. I think that type of assignment is too broad and does not accomplish much.

The difference with this assignment is it's not so much an autobiography as it is narrative writing about students' personal experiences, zeroing in on one memory or another. Students MUST write from what they know, and this forces them to do that. We did talk about taking liberty with the truth (like adding reasonable dialogue though we didn't really remember exactly what was said at the time).

The one project my students completed this summer was a personal memory book that, ideally, will be added to over time.

The assignment I spoke of was a childhood memory narrative. Essentially I did the following things:

1. Freewrite about a sad, happy, scary, funny, etc. time in your childhood; something that REALLY stands out in your mind that seems like it would be a good story to tell.

2. Reading lots and lots and lots of biographical and autobiographical writing to get a feel for the genre. Kids' books especially. (Fictional texts that had the feel of biographical/auto were also included like Rylant's "The Relatives Came")

3. Mini-lessons on:

-- a. writing effective leads: we practiced writing leads for our papers in each of the styles I introduced.

-- b. including the whole story--beginning, middle, and end.

-- c. considering your reader/audience--students exchanged freewrites and wrote questions they had about what had been written to draw out details

-- d. revision: using my paper as a model, give feedback using a simple Like/Needs Improvement two-column revision being sure to be specific

4. Time to write EVERYDAY.

5. Expectation and credit for two drafts, a critique by another student and the final copy--demonstrates the importance of the process rather than just the product.

6. Individual informal writing conferences. Students who showed frustration through off task or inappropriate behavior usually needed me to sit with them for a while to talk through their ideas. They had a real fear of putting ideas to paper, but once they heard from me they were on the right track or cleared up confusion, they were my most dedicated students. I saw PRIDE in their writing, and that's worth more than the product itself.

I am not thinking very clearly right now, so if you have any questions or there's information you need that I haven't included, please ask away. I think my real pleasure with this unit/approach is the change in attitude I have seen about writing. My kids have shown excitement and insist on sharing their writing with me and anyone else who will listen!

Ellen

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LeeAnn shared a reading lesson.

My students and I read a story from Read magazine called "A Letter from the Fringe." The main character of the story was explaining what it felt like to her and her friends to be on the outside, or the fringe, at her school. It was written like an open letter to all the other students who looked down on them or harrassed them. After we read the story, I asked my students to write their own letters to anyone that had ever made them feel bad about themselves--to explain themselves to this person (or group), not to get angry and defensive. They wrote to other students, teachers, parents--and their letters were very powerful. We shared them in class (those who wished) and we hung them in hall with all names blacked out. It generated a lot of discussion in the halls too, among all the grade levels.

LeeAnn

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Cossondra shared a not-so pleasant "teachable moment" lesson.

Plagiarism !!

The English teacher and I collaborated on a unit about the 1960's (I was teaching 8th grade American history). Unfortunately, a huge number of the reports/projects were plagiarized, either in part or whole.

I had a long classroom discussion about plagiarism and assigned a 750 word paper about plagiarism - what is it, why is is wron, how did students feel towards other who plagiarize and get away with it, what punishments should be, how they as an author would feel if someone plagiarized their work, etc... They moaned and groaned initially -but EVERY student did the assignment - the ONLY homework assignment all year the be completed 100% - the essays were awesome - the students showed an incredible amount of maturity in their thoughts on this issue. I was shocked at how many students confessed they had plagiarized but not been caught, some on this assignment.

This assignment was the most thought provoking I have seen. I got the feeling for some, it was among one of the first thing they had ever completely done on their own!

Cossondra

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Marsha offered a lesson that developed from her work as a staff developer.

The best lesson that I taught to students came when I was working with the library media specialist and art teacher who collaborated on a Women's History project. Their idea was to build on Judy Chicago's Dinner Party idea and let students do their own research about a famous woman in history, then design a placemat, dinner plate and goblet that symbolized that woman's achievements.

My job was to help them synthesize their research. The library media specialist had done a terrific job of setting up their notetaking tool by having them divide a 12 x 18 piece of paper into small boxes, each box having some kind of fact inside. The problem these 7th graders were having revolved around not being able to translate all those facts into symbols. They just didn't get it. They were bored and wishing they were back in math class(not really, but it was pretty bad!!!).

So I was lucky enough to draw that duty. Using an interactive whiteboard, I hotlisted several dozen examples of symbols in three categories. The first category was pretty straightforward and right out of the kids' media awareness realm. The second I displayed those symbols, the classes were able to shout out what it stood for (the golden arches, the "O" from Oakley sunglasses, etc). Once they had that idea, I moved onto the next set of symbols on my hotlist. Those were things I had created in Photoshop --- a bus with a petite older African American lady who had crossed arms sitting in a bus seat and the kids almost immediately recognized Rosa Parks. Next I used several more: an outline of the state of Israel and a legislative chamber(Golda Mier), a space shuttle morphed with engineering tools(Sally Ride),a covered wagon, sodhut, and book (Laura Ingalls Wilder) etc. They loved this part of the activity.

Finally we got to the moment of thinking. I had them look over their list and think about what symbols they could use from their research notes. They talked about it with a shoulder partner to refine ideas.

Then I showed them the last part of my hotlist, the part where the symbols were not so straightforward. Again I had used Photoshop to create images. My first one was the image of a Civil War Hospital, a lantern, and a pair of inquiring eyes (Florence Nightingale), another image was of a woman leading young children, dishevled people as she looked forward imposed on top of an outline of Argentina (Evita Peron), a cropped image of the Vietnam nurses from the Memorial.

At this point, the library media specialist whipped out all the arty books---you know those coffee table types that have beautiful images --- and the kids scoured through them looking for things that could be used to symbolize their woman.

As a last touch to this, I had bookmarked the National Gallery of Art website which has wonderful images and we looked at several pieces I had preselected. Especially the goblets and all their detail. Then they went to work sketching and searching books to find the perfect blend of symbols --- for two class periods you could hear a pin drop.

When my part was over, the art teacher took back over and they went back to her room to create the ideas they had imagined. Several weeks later I had the pleasure of viewing the visual feast of women from all over the world and time. Students had transformed symbols onto batiked placemats, dinner plates and goblets. My favorite piece was usually the goblet because it just seemed to inspire the kids to show the spirit of freedom --- like a person reaching upwards ( they loved the goblets from NGA website that showed this).

The art teacher is working in a different building next year. So I'm figuring out how to teach this lesson as a cooperative, distance learning project. It was too powerful not to do again. We'll just have to adapt to being in different geographical locations...no big deal!!!

marsha

PS: I loved this lesson because I was a part of two other teachers who I dearly love, respect and treasure. I loved this lesson because the kids who had dreaded an art research project were fired up and interested. I loved this lesson because I was able to use technology to amplify what the learning objective was in ways I couldn't have done otherwise. I mostly loved this lesson because I witnessed the miracle of student learning, discussing big ideas and lots of light bulbs going off as their minds raced to make the connections.

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Charles Lindgren came through with an engaging science lesson.

My best lesson this year had to be on asteroids. In February 0f 2001 the NEAR spacecraft made its closest approach to the asteroid Eros. I think it actually "landed" on it on Feb. 14th. I wanted to try and duplicate that event in my class. I darkened the room and suspended a small sphere from the ceiling using clear fishing line to duplicate Eros. I then placed a digital camera on a cart and had a student take a series of photographs of "Eros" starting at a distant point in the room and continuing until they "landed" taking one photograph every .5 meters. The images were then projected on a screen and the students had to describe the changes they saw in "Eros" as the "spacecraft" came closer and closer.

The first image showed "Eros" as a little dot. Each succeeding photo showed more detail as the "spacecraft" came closer. The major problem with the assignment was that the students could see "Eros" right in front of them. As a result they ignored the images and simply wrote details about the sphere suspended before them.

After the 4th or 5th image some of the students actually started to seriously look at the images and see things that weren't on the sphere. What they didn't know was that I was actually showing them a set of images from the previous class, and I'd changed "asteroids." Instead of a sphere, they were looking at images of an irregularly shaped piece of lava.

We had a great discussion about preconceived ideas on what scientists thought objects would look like and what actually appears. We then went back and looked at the images a second time. Then they gave more realistic observations on "Eros."

The software I used to show the images was "NIH Image" for the Mac or SCION for the pc. This is a fantastic piece of software, and it's free! Teachers can stack a series of images and animate them, create false color images, make measurements, create 3-D images, etc.

Send your science teachers to

http://rsb.info.nih.gov/nih-image/

for a free download.

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Staff developer Melba Smithwick modeled her favorite lesson for the year.

My most successful lesson this year was when I went into an 8th grade science classroom to model an activity on summarization. The students were just beginning a research project and their teacher wanted to do something different that would get the students more actively involved and not just do the "same old stuff". The kids call it chunking, but it is actually paired reading.

The students were given a xeroxed copy of one of the pages from a source. They were asked to break up the reading into small chunks and number them. Student A read chunk #1 while student B listened or followed along. Student B summarizes what Student A read, they discuss and agree on the summary and each write it down on a sheet of paper. Next, Student B reads chunk #2 and Student A summarizes. They continue the process until the entire passage is read and summarized. Finally, the each write their own summary on the entire passage. This is an independent activity.

All of the students, 100% of them were engaged and seemed pretty enthusiastic about it. The teacher followed me around as I monitored the class stopping to coach students who were not working, encouraging them and teaching them one to one if they needed it.

After the class was over, the teacher told me about the kids who usually do not work, "so I'm giving up too soon, huh?" He then taught the rest of his classes (3-90 minute blocks) while I moved on to another classroom to model another reading strategy. During his last class, he sent a student to get me so I could observe him teach this strategy for feedback. This was my second modeling I had done for the year 2001-2002 as the new staff developer on my campus.

I think the successfulness of this lesson was twofold. One, the teacher had an "ahha" moment and continued to implement this strategy; his 7th grade collegue heard about it and asked me to do the same for her and her students. Two, my former students were so impressed that I actually knew how to read, "how to do 8th grade science", and that I knew other subjects besides math and algebra! Kids, aren't they wonderful?!

Melba

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Myrna, a teacher/principal in Atlanta, modeled an integrated project.

My idea this year was to model a project for the middle school teachers that would integrate several disciplines and encourage independent research for the students. I teach the Facing History and Ourselves program to eighth graders and each year try to add several hands on projects to the units in the book.

While in the airport I found a small book called, Postcards from WW.II which contained both pictures and writings from American soldiers. I adapted this idea and worked with the art and English teachers. Each section (3) had a topic- rescuers, resistance and world response. Pairs of students in each section chose a subtopic to research and then create a postcard from one person in their study and then also create an illustration (which we tea dyed to age). For example, one pair of students studied Raoul Wallenberg; their postcard was from him to his government and the illustration was a picture of him issuing false passports.

This project took about 3 weeks to complete-with weekly checkups using a rubric.The students in each section presented their postcards and research as a walking display through the hallway. What I learned was that the students were totally involved because they chose their topics and were given the responsibility of setting up the display.

Myrna

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At the urging of Trish, who had heard Rick Wormeli talk about a plagiarizing lesson during a workshop, Rick shared this:

The lesson about which Trisha is speaking is a lesson that I've done each year for the past dozen years or so and it's worked well. So well, in fact, I have students coming back from college who say they were sorely tempted to plagiarize on various projects in high school and college but didn't after recalling the lesson.

This description comes from a rough draft I wrote for Meet Me in the Middle (Stenhouse), so it's not as smooth as the final version in the book, and it doesn't have the statistical research added to the manuscript before publication. It appears in its final form in Chapter Three of the book, "Brain Research Applied to Middle School." Here's the draft:

Recently, I pretended to share a part of this chapter with my students on the pretext of seeking their critique. I actually shared an already published piece on teaching, but it was hidden in a notebook from which I read. A parent "plant" was in the room for the period, pretending to observe the lesson. I often invite parents to stop by, so it wasn't unusual.

While I read and claimed the words were my own, the parent acted increasingly uncomfortable. Finally, she interrupted me and said that she just couldn't let me go on. She had heard the exact ideas I claimed as my own in another book. I assured her she was confused and continued. She interrupted me again, this time angrily. She said she was not confused, and she was sure I had lifted the material from another source. At this point, I let my face become red and I appeared more anxious about her words. Her anger grew until I finally admitted that it was "borrowed" from other authors.

She let me have it then. The parent spoke to me about being in a position of trust as a teacher. She said I was being a terrible role model and that my students would never again trust me with my writings or teaching. She decided this was a breach of professional conduct and that my principal would be informed. Throughout all of this, I countered with the excuses students often make when caught plagiarizing: It was only a small part, the rest of the chapter is all original. What does it matter that these few lines are not my own if nobody suffers from it? I've never done it before, and I'm not ever doing it again, so it's not that bad.

The students' jaws fell open in disbelief. They felt the unease of being trapped in a lie and having one's reputation impugned. At the height of the emotional tension between the parent and me, I paused and asked the students, "Have you had enough?" All thirty heads cocked to one side and mouthed, "What?"

With a smile and a thank you to the parent assistant, I asked how many folks would like to hear about six ways not to plagiarize material, then I went to the chalkboard. Notebooks flew on to desktops and pens raced across the page to get everything I taught for the rest of class. Students wanted to do anything to avoid the "yucky" feeling associated with plagiarism from moments ago.

I taught them how to cite sources, how to paraphrase another's words, and for how many words from an original source it was generally accepted you could use before you weren't paraphrasing any more. We discussed the legal ramifications of plagiarism and later we applauded the acting talent of our parent assistant. As the students left, they all said they would never again be tempted to plagiarize.
A speaker at a recent in-service training session in my school said that the amygdala on the hippocampus encodes emotions on to information before sending it to long-term memory. The emotion acts like a beacon. The stronger it is, the more easily retrievable the information. This is why learning experiences with a strong emotional component are retained longer and with more accurate recall than experiences that lack emotional attachment.

Is it possible to go too far? Yes. Pat Wolfe says that too much emotion actually paralyzes the learner with anxiety and it can slow the processing or prevent it from happening -- emotion dominates cognition. A teacher's angry threats toward a student, for example, cause such paralysis. The key, then, is to maximize the emotional component of our lessons without crossing the threshold into shutdown mode.

The power of the emotional connection was manifest every time I had a guest speaker on the Vietnam War or the Holocaust. They were spellbound during the presentations, and they remembered weeks later almost verbatim content that was shared by those speakers. Emotion doesn't have to be in the form of trauma to be effective. Joy, excitement, suspense, anger, unease, sorrow, and curiosity make content vivid and retained just as well.

Two of my students wrote commentary for Meet Me in the Middle about this one lesson. Here's what they said:
When my teacher got "caught" plagiarizing by my mom, I know I'll never forget it. The sensations were simply too real --..although my teacher is extremely moral, it was frightening how close to home it stuck. The moment when my teacher admitted it, the room fell silent. It was awful, all my life teachers have preached about plagiarism and it never really sunk in, but when you actually experience it , it's a whole different story. -- Laura, 7th grade

My English teacher's lesson on plagiarism was the most memorable lesson I'll have in his class all year. I'll never forget that tension we felt in the classroom. -- Pam, 7th grade

-- Rick W.

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Cossondra replied:

Thanks Rick...great idea - maybe I will "borrow" it - reminds of the a lesson on our judicial system where I accused 3 pre-warned students of stealing pop from my classroom refrigerator. With then tried them using several forms of "old" justice, including giving them gum to chew (one piece was the kind that colors your mouth) to determine who was guilty/innnocent - similar to when in Dark Ages, the accused was wounded to see if they would heal.

Anyway, your idea of "Traumatizing" the crowd is the same "live - it" type experience - you are so on the money - anytime kids can FEEL what it is, they internalize so much more efficiently.

- Cossondra

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Karen shared a lesson developed by another teacher.

I am also going to cheat a little bit as I have been coordinating language arts and am therefore sending a lesson developed by a teacher in our district. We have incorporated this into district-wide curriculum ideas as well.

At the end of 8th grade, after having experience with all forms of writing, after state testing is done, when 8th graders are practically shut down, kids do a magazine of their own creation. The title and type of magazine reflects interests of theirs, so some are fashion, some are rock stars, some are motorcycles, some are sports, some are astronomy, but the focus is entirely up to the student's interests. The magazine needs to have articles expository in nature, articles that are narrative, articles of description, articles that reflect opinions, poetry, technical writing and whatever else the student wants to put in it. There are certain required elements, and some required "elective" pieces. There is also extra credit for those who go above and beyond with word games, crosswords, etc.

This was a wonderful end of year activity that combined reading of materials similar to that being written, writing in many different modes, organizing material, keeping a focus on something of interest, and finishing a project by a very real deadline.

It was a big success in her classroom and I suspect will be used often by others in our district.

Karen in Colorado

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Joanne liked Karen's idea.

How I love this type of assignment...... I can't help but be reminded of watching Olympic Ice Skating...... the compulsories and the, oh heck....... the second part.... Anyway, each part has required elements, plus time for the skater's own creativity. Perhaps we can point this correlation out to our students when we make these types of assignments..... that athletes face similar requirements in their sport. Might help a few reluctant kids make a connection.

Joanne Payling
Livermore, CA

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Carolyn's lesson required students to write letters to new parents.

In teaching child development in a FACS class for sixth graders, I require students to keep a folder for papers, notes, starters,etc. As a final assessment, I allowed students to use their folders and asked them to write a letter to the parents of a newborn baby. They were asked to include in the letter all the things they thought were most important for the parents to know when raising a child. The letters were awesome. They were clearly written, in good format, and each included many more important concepts than I expected from sixth graders.

Carolyn Franklin, IN

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Kathy combined non-fiction study and science in her unit.

My most successful lesson/unit was the reading of Shipwrecked at the Bottom of the World by Jennifer Armstrong. My kids loved this book. They learned the content, the exploration of Antarctica. The whole time we were involved with this book there was a sense of awe in the classroom. The kids felt like they were part of the trip. They learned empathy for people through reading this book. They learned science, reading , everything. I was able to teach strategies for non fiction reading. We did responses for non-fiction.

We explored the concept of leadership, in depth, using Shackleton as our model.

The content was so new for the kids, learning about Antarctica, they just ate it all up.

After reading this we went ot work on the Antarctic treaty. We studied it together. Then the kids wrote persuasive essays about whether it was a good document or not.

I can't wait to do this again in a few years.

Kathy from Vermont


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