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Week #10
Retelling -- and
Assessing from Rubrics

I know what retelling is. It's rereading.
It means that you read the story again.
--
Leti, a Reading Workshop student from our class

Retelling has proven to be a powerful technique for helping our students get involved in the story elements (characters, plot, setting, sequence of events, main idea, etc.) of a piece of text, either fiction or non-fiction. Retellings collected over time help us see students' development as readers who can organize the sequence of their reading selections. But retellings do not make a complete reading program! So we wanted to be cautious about doing too much retelling and doing it for too long at the beginning of our Reading Workshop.

We start by modeling retelling using flow maps. Thinking Maps, a program for teaching students how to use graphic organizers, includes flow maps as one of the ways to assist students with Reading Comprehension in sequencing and ordering information. Thinking Maps are a great resource for helping student's build understanding in Reading. They have several examples on their web site.

Once students understand the process for using flow maps to do retelling of text, we let them work with a partner doing a retelling together. Finally, when they are really successful together, they do them independently. They record them in their Reading Notebooks so we have a record of their growth over time.

Rubrics help us measure progress

In order to judge their progress and make decisions about next steps in teaching we use a set of 4 rubrics. The set includes rubrics for Sequencing, Fiction and Non-Fiction Retelling, as well as, Summarizing. The Retelling Rubrics are adapted from our district ones to reflect the use of flow maps and the issue of copying from the text. Teachers on my grade level team at the middle school where I worked developed the other two, for Sequencing and Summarizing. We collaborated across content areas to come up with assessments that we could use and discuss as a team. They also reflected our school's focus on Literacy and Reading Comprehension across the content areas.

Download the rubrics at this page

We teach students to score their retelling flow maps using the Sequencing Rubric first. It is the simplest and is easily understood. Using the rubric over time prompts the students to include certain things in their retellings. It has proven to be very useful for teachers and students.

Then, we move to the Retelling Rubrics for Fiction and Non-fiction Text. Since these require knowledge of text elements and the ability to differentiate between narrative and expository text, they are more difficult.

The fourth rubric is for Summarizing. We use this after the students can easily retell from text and identify main idea and common themes in their reading. This rubric helps move students beyond a literal understanding of text.

Since reading is about understanding, we teach students that using tools like flow maps helps you get more understandings from your reading. They enjoy taking what they are reading and making it tangible. Guiding Readers and Writers (p.324) describes it this way (summarized):

Retelling is commonly used as a tool for assessment and/or a regular part of instruction. You will want to be careful not to overuse this technique. If retelling means students simply repeat everything they can remember after reading a text, then the task is one of memory. After all, remembering everything in the story or informational piece is not the critical act of comprehension. The readers must select important information, weave it together and integrate it with background knowledge. Reading is about responding to reading. We would not want our students to read solely for the purpose of delivering a verbatim account of their texts. Comprehension is integral to reading....


Leti's update


Understanding the concept of "retelling from text"


Based on the quote at the beginning of this journal entry, Leti, in some sense understands that reading the story again (going back to the text) is a good strategy for readers when they want to be sure they understand what they are reading. But in the big picture, something is missing from her understanding about retelling from text.

What happened as we went along and what strategies we tried

Leti had difficulty using the flow map for retelling at first. Even if she was given the beginning and ending, she struggled to fill in the middle in the proper sequence. We tried talking her through the retelling before she wrote it down. This seemed to help. But when she worked with a partner, she showed a much-improved sense of what and how to retell.

How we adjusted and retaught and what progress we've seen

Now, we check in with Leti before she starts her retelling to make sure she has a clear view of what to do. We encourage her to talk through the retelling with her partner before beginning to write it down. On the Sequencing Rubric she began with a score of 2 and now scores a 3. This means, "she minimally conveys the chronological order of events/steps. Some essential information may be missing. She gives some details but her retelling may include some inaccuracies."


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