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Members of the MiddleWeb Discussion List and other interested teachers are joining together to explore the Writing Workshop and other ideas about supporting young adolescent writers and readers. Juli Kendall, a reading-writing teacher/coach in Long Beach, California, is helping moderate the discussion. Last year, Juli kept a weekly journal from her Reading Workshop.

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Writing Workshop
Week #29:

Thematic Writing:
Shooting for the Sun!

Look at the Sun, but use a Sunspotter. Sunspots spanning the surface. Solar flares flying into space. The Solar Wind stirring things up.

And that's just the beginning.

Take, for instance, auroras -- "many Native Elders in Alaska, Canada, Denmark, Greenland and Siberia say that Northern Lights are created by spirits playing soccer in the sky. When the players run, they leave streaks of color that can be seen from Earth as the Aurora. These spirits use a walrus head for a soccer ball." (http://www.auroraalive.com)

They got that right.

Now our kids are seeing spots before their eyes! No, they aren't dizzy or about to pass out. These are Sunspots, and it's all a part of our thematic unit of study in Writing Workshop -- "The Sun Has Spots!"

To plan for this unit of study, I began with a review of the science standards and benchmarks. Then, starting on the Sun-Earth Day 2003 website, "Live from the Aurora", I found everything I needed. The site includes a PDF version of their educators' guide that I used to plan the science content for our thematic unit of study about Sunspots.

Here's what I came up with:

National Science Education Standards (NSES) Grades 5-8

The motion of an object can be described by its position, direction of motion, and speed. That motion can be measured and represented on a graph.

Most objects in the solar system are in regular and predictable motion. Those motions explain such phenomena as the day, the year, phases of the moon, and eclipses.

Many individuals have contributed to the traditions of science. Studying some of these individuals provides further understanding of scientific inquiry, science as a human endeavor, the nature of science, and the relationships between science and society.

Tracing the history of science can show how difficult if was for scientific innovators to bread through the accepted ideas of their time to reach the conclusions that we currently take for granted.

Benchmarks for Science Literacy

Scientific knowledge is subject to modification as new information challenges prevailing theories and as a new theory leads to looking at old observations in a new way.

Some scientific knowledge is very old and yet is still applicable today.

Important contributions to the advancement of science, mathematics, and technology have been made by different kinds of people, in different cultures, at different times.

Telescopes reveal that there are many more stars in the night sky than are evident to the unaided eye, the surface of the moon has many craters and mountains, the Sun has dark spots, and Jupiter and some other planets have their own moons.

Thinking about things as systems means looking for how every part relates to others. The output from one part of a system (which can include material, energy, or information) can become the input to other parts. Such feedback can serve to control what goes on in the system as a whole.

Instructional Objectives

Students will learn to observe the Sun safely and will discover that the Sun has spots that appear and disappear over time. Students will discover that the Sun rotates.

Resources for Reading about the Sun and Sunspots

The next step was to gather print resources -- texts that kids can read and use to learn. Immersing ourselves in reading is an important first part of any unit of study in writing workshop. The idea for this thematic study is "that the walls between the two disciplines (reading and writing) will come down." So I looked for a variety of materials for kids to read during our shared thematic study of the Sun and Sunspots.

Print resources:

"Galileo," from Pioneer Astronomers by Navin Sullivan

"Telescopes" from The Way Things Work by David Macaulay

Stars by Simon Seymour

Space Songs, a collection of poems, by Myra Cohn Livingston

Materials from "Live from the Aurora," 2003 Educators Guide for Sun-Earth Day

As they read, kids will "weigh what value each brings to their understanding of the topic, monitor each for sense and for its relationship to other readings." Since immersion in reading is the first part of the framework for a unit of study, "they will learn to read at various levels of depth -- perhaps first skimming, then focusing on selected materials, then reading and re-reading those to learn what the author is trying to say. Students will compare ideas and conclusions presented in one reading to those from other readings, and there will be discussion about how to differentiate sources that are relevant and useful from those that are less so. Students will be encouraged to separate fact from opinion, and to learn new strategies to negotiate difficult text.

"Meanwhile, the teacher will help to bring out big conceptual ideas related to the topic so that when students need to, they can draw concepts and ideas from the reading. These concepts may lead them to synthesize larger and more important ideas. They will not only search out significant and useful information, but learn to read critically, questioning the meaning and importance of whatever information they discover." (From the Curricular Calendar for Reading Workshop)

But our reading will not be restricted to just print materials. We've also collected websites related to the Sun and Sunspots. The National Education Technology Standards state: "Students use technology to locate, evaluate, and collect information from a variety of sources." Here are some of our favorite places to search for information about the Sun and Sunspots:

http://www.spaceweather.com

http://www.sec.noaa.gov/SWN/

http://sohowww.nascom.nasa.gov/

http://solar-center.stanford.edu/about.html

http://science.nasa.gov

http://science.nasa.gov/ssl/pad/solar/for%5Ftony/hi%5Fschool/intro.htm

http://www.cosc.org/vsc/planetarium/thesky/stardome/default.asp#howtoread

Assembling the Thematic Unit


After all the resources were gathered, I started working on how to assemble this thematic unit. For help, I turned to the experts on reading, writing, and research as a part of inquiry. On pages 6-7 in Nonfiction Matters (online at Stenhouse), Stephanie Harvey lists "a few things we keep in mind to guide our practice."

Teachers can engage in nonfiction inquiry by going through the process themselves. It looks like I'm going to be doing a research project, too.

Teachers need to share their passion and curiosity about inquiry and research. At the first part of the unit of study, I plan to share the interesting and exciting facts I've learned as I assembled the unit, "The Sun Has Spots."

Research begins with a question. I'll show the kids how I developed my question -- "What are auroras and what do they have to do with the Sun?"

Research projects take time. I've allowed three weeks for our projects, but we'll take more time, if necessary.

To write nonfiction, read nonfiction. This unit of study in Writing Workshop runs parallel to a study of nonfiction reading in Reading Workshop. In addition, we'll immerse ourselves in reading about the Sun during Writing Workshop.

Writers write about things they know about, care about, and wonder about. Kids will develop questions based on their background experience and prior knowledge of the Sun.

Writers need to own their topics and projects. I watched as the kids worked on their feature articles and persuasive essays. I know that when they choose their own topics and do their own research, they become deeply invested in their writing projects.

Writers need opportunities to share their products. At the end of the unit of study, we'll invite another class to listen to our research projects. They'll also be able to give us some feedback.

Nonfiction inquiry must be authentic whenever possible. This will be an "umbrella" unit of study. We'll all work under the umbrella of "The Sun Has Spots." It will be really important for the kids to develop their own, authentic questions about this topic.

I also went back to several Reading Workshop journals about nonfiction that I wrote last year. They helped me review what I already know about teaching thematic units.

Week #32 -- Leti's Search for Gold - The Importance and Power of Non-Fiction
Week #33 -- Confessions of a Non- Non-Fiction Teacher
Week #34 -- A Road Map for Content-Area Reading

Thanks to Stephanie Harvey, I've begun my own nonfiction inquiry into the Sun and Sunspots. I've developed a question and plan to be well on my way this next week as the kids work on their research projects.

Oh, and just remember -- never look directly at the Sun!



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